Here is the draft of my human disease project.  Please give me your feedback, I am going to be adding more data and statistics.  Let me your thoughts.
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Jenny
3/26/2012 03:02:32 pm

Dee~
Nice work . . . even after having surgery and only use of one hand. All the elements for the assignment are included in your draft and that was what I was looking for Cover Page, Header/Footer, Table of Content, Poster, Bibliography. My feedback would be WOW! You have got the personal account and details from your voice. Now you can use the statistics to focus the audience to see your plight. You have found a lot of resources so now you can choose the data that supports your project. Nice work!!

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Miriam Mendoza
3/26/2012 03:36:15 pm

WOW! Great Job ;)
thank u for sharing your experience with us :)

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Kathy Black
4/9/2012 01:36:52 am

Thank you for sharing your report and some of your personal experiences. It is very interesting and informative.

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Adriana Lopez
4/30/2012 05:16:12 am

Wow! It was really informative and interesting specially your personal experience intro Thank you for sharing your experiences with us.

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